Alejandra Soto
Period 5
Ms. O’Young
3-19-14
What do you think about or do when you cannot fall asleep?
If i cannot sleep at night most of the time i listen to music from my ipod and zone out or play some very quiet slow types of songs, sometimes when i listen to my music, i forget that i have my earbuds on and fall asleep with my ipod still playing, but sometimes when i can’t sleep it is because i am hungry, either i ignore the empty feeling in my stomach or give in and head on to the kitchen to look for something to eat, so i get up, and make myself a peanut butter jelly sandwich, which i eat all the time, it’s my favorite food, it is very easy to make and fast to eat, i can scarf it down in three minutes or less, and of course its delicious. and when i do that, i often wake up my dad because of all the bright lights that i turn on and he too eats PBJ because he gets a sudden craving for a midnight snack as well, if i really can’t fall asleep, i go to my back up plan, watching tv until my eyes start to droop down, seeing nothing but darkness then all of a sudden seeing a bright screen gets my eyes to close very fast, then reason that i cannot sleep most of the time is because i have too much in my mind or i had just watched a scary movie by myself and all i can think about is that movie, the image of a scary face keeps my mind alert and in fear of danger in my room, therefore i don’t allow myself to fall asleep until i can’t take it anymore. therefore the only way i can finally fall asleep is to let it come naturally
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1. Do you feel like you have some of the same solutions I have for having trouble sleeping?
2. What part of the story do you like?
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FIRST READER RESPONSE
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First Reader: (Weyland)
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1. Kinda I eat if I’m really tired but I don’t usually listen to music
2.I liked that you and your dad eat PB and J at night together
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