Thursday, May 8, 2014

definition essay reflection


  1. I think that this essay, I should get a  70/100. I re-read it after I had turned it in and realized that some parts made no sense. Organization on this essay wasn't as strong as I wanted it to be. Because this essay came with no outline requirements, it was difficult to sty organized.
  2. The most helpful part of the writing process would the self edit. It gave me the chance to re-look at my essay and fix anything that did not make sense. Added a few more details or deleted vague sentences.
  3. My biggest strength for this essay would be the examples that I had provided. It allowed the essay to be more well rounded in the meaning of the word. The best example that I used was the one that I based on a movie. 
  4. I would improve on the content of the essay. I only had I strong example, and the others weren't as strong. Improving the meaning of the word using better examples would make the essay better overall.
  5.   A goal for the next essay would to be formulate all my ideas and choose which are the best to use. Therefore it can be better structured and easier to understand. Also to add more opinions to the topic that I have chosen.
  6. I had accomplish part of my goal, by adding a story to the essay and making the detail really stand out. However, I did not accomplish the other part to the goal of spending more time on the drafting process because, of other after school activities.