Descriptive reflection

1. I would give myself a 40 or lower on this essay because i struggled with this type of essay. I had a hard time staying on topic and knowing what to write next. My transitions were not very helpful at all and didn't smoothly move on to the next paragraph. At the end of the essay, I started to write about something completely different than what my original purpose was supposed to be.
2. I like the self revision part of the writing process because it allows you to look back at your essay and see what you can improve on or what can you change to make the essay better. 
3. My only strength in this essay is being able to describe something. But the problem was that the description that i gave had nothing to do with the exigence, so is wasn't very helpful at all. 
4. I would improve the entire essay if i could, maybe even change topic, in order to stay on topic more. With that, have better content and structure to the essay. This class allows me to continue to improve the essay, even after its been submitted. I will certainly take advantage of that, so I can earn a high and better grade, and have a better, well written essay. 
5. The goal for my next essay would be to work on my essay, and that means to make time to write. Having a job makes it a lot harder to do that, but i have to make time and prioritize my work in order to write better essays, and have time to do other things. I have to stay on topic this to time and to NOT procrastinate while working on the essay. That is my biggest issue and I have to learn to fix the issue.